下面是范文網(wǎng)小編分享的關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧19篇 作文得高分的技巧的高中范文，供大家參考。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧1
根據(jù)以上的題目解構(gòu)信息，尋找關(guān)鍵詞的下義詞和衍生詞，根據(jù)已有素材確定寫(xiě)作框架。
如：
Computer technology：on-line， PC， laptop， broadband
Working from home： Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer，
artists Studying from home： on-line course， the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country
Cheaper： on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB
Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB
Easily accessible ： in city-- at least one PC every house
Broadband：almost every house; school
Net bar： almost every neighbourhood
Outline：
2 Introduction：
Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)
Positive development (opinion)
2 Body：
Benefits of studying from home：
Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)
Freer--- white collar for further education in free time
Benefits of working from home：
artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive
Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity
Drawbacks：
Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)
2 Conclusion： inevitable trend( with self-discipline)
備注：在實(shí)戰(zhàn)考試中無(wú)需把大綱寫(xiě)得如此詳細(xì)，但胸有成竹一定會(huì)使之后文章的寫(xiě)作如魚(yú)得水。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧2
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧要點(diǎn)一：涵蓋題目所有要求
拿官方網(wǎng)站最新公布的留學(xué)類第一篇作文樣題為例，兩個(gè)圖表分別顯示的是1985年到1995年日本國(guó)民海外游的數(shù)量變化以及其中去澳大利亞旅游的人數(shù)的變化。在寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，考生應(yīng)首先將十年來(lái)日本國(guó)民海外游的數(shù)量變化趨勢(shì)以及去澳大利亞的人數(shù)變化趨勢(shì)概括出來(lái)，然后進(jìn)行細(xì)化，看其趨勢(shì)的變化有沒(méi)有起伏、如何表現(xiàn)等，再對(duì)兩組數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，這樣才能充分涵蓋題目的要求。如果只是簡(jiǎn)單的羅列堆砌，不做任何的分析、概括和比較，扣分就難以避免了。所以說(shuō)小編還是要提醒大家注意要明確雅思寫(xiě)作要求，多總結(jié)雅思寫(xiě)作題目。
因此，考生在復(fù)習(xí)備考階段不要盲目地練寫(xiě)文章，要多訓(xùn)練提高信息歸類和概括能力。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧3
結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，從文章整體來(lái)說(shuō)是講一篇文章起碼要有開(kāi)頭、中間和結(jié)尾，每個(gè)中間段要有一句主題句總領(lǐng)整段，下面依次展開(kāi)，最后有一句話收尾。結(jié)構(gòu)合理則是指文章的論證結(jié)構(gòu)合理，特別是高分作文，立場(chǎng)要非常清晰。
最新公布的留學(xué)類第二篇作文的題目是有關(guān)于對(duì)兒童兼職的不同看法。在寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，考生首先就要鮮明地提出自己是否支持兒童做兼職，之后在過(guò)渡段里提及與自己意見(jiàn)不同的論點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明理由是什么，其后放主要的筆墨論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以結(jié)合親身經(jīng)歷或了解到的實(shí)例來(lái)證明觀點(diǎn)的正確性，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)陳述，進(jìn)一步確認(rèn)對(duì)于兒童應(yīng)不應(yīng)該做兼職的觀點(diǎn)和意見(jiàn)。
在備考雅思時(shí)，考生要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的建立，力求做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚、論證比例合理。
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧要點(diǎn)三：詞匯運(yùn)用豐富、靈活
新評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)最大的改變是把老評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的第三方面“詞匯和語(yǔ)法”分解成詞匯和語(yǔ)法兩個(gè)細(xì)則。這樣一來(lái)，詞匯和語(yǔ)法、任務(wù)完成或任務(wù)反應(yīng)、連貫與銜接在評(píng)分時(shí)的權(quán)重是一樣的。所以，要獲得雅思作文高分，同時(shí)也要在詞匯上狠下功夫才行。
在詞匯的準(zhǔn)備方面，要注意寬度和難度兩方面的訓(xùn)練。詞匯的寬度是指在一篇要求字?jǐn)?shù)的文章內(nèi)，能用不同的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)同一個(gè)內(nèi)容，避免重復(fù)，如用grow、goup、increase、rise、raise、boost等不同詞匯表達(dá)“上升”這個(gè)意思。詞匯的難度，是指在文章中是選用比較幼稚的詞匯，還是有一定文體標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、適合于學(xué)術(shù)場(chǎng)景表達(dá)的詞匯。大多數(shù)中國(guó)考生都會(huì)普遍使用at the same time來(lái)表示“與此同時(shí)”，但是在正式文體里，表達(dá)此意的詞應(yīng)為mean while或in the meantime。
雅思備考：教你寫(xiě)雅思作文長(zhǎng)句
雅思寫(xiě)作長(zhǎng)句技巧一：避免空洞的單詞和詞組
1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)或重要的信息，完全可以刪掉。
比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換。
例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧4
高考作文寫(xiě)作高分技巧
一：作文要注重真情，把握真實(shí)是關(guān)鍵
構(gòu)思是文章的骨架，內(nèi)容是血肉，而情感則是神經(jīng)。閱卷老師認(rèn)為文章不是無(wú)情物，一篇好文章，就應(yīng)該具有良好的情感態(tài)度，換言之，即使文章的內(nèi)容很平實(shí)，但情感卻足夠真摯，就像朱自清先生的《背影》，同樣也能憾人心魄。在考場(chǎng)作文中，寫(xiě)人記事發(fā)議論，心中飽藏真情，讓現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的境與溢出紙外的真情相呼應(yīng)，則自成佳境。沒(méi)有情感的境，如同行尸走肉，令人生厭。用真情關(guān)照生活，雖一花一草，一人一物，也熠熠生輝!
二：開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾要簡(jiǎn)練，最好首尾兩行半
大頭作文要不得。除非特殊情況，建議考生在寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾占兩行半的格子，頂多不能超過(guò)三行半。
三：動(dòng)筆之前要擬題，漂亮標(biāo)題如美女
準(zhǔn)備題目的辦法有2個(gè)，你可以去網(wǎng)絡(luò)上搜索作文題目，歸納作文老師講述的類似技巧;二是翻閱最近一年的《讀者》或《青年文摘》等雜志，根據(jù)題材選擇一些比較精彩的標(biāo)題，記下來(lái)，也許考試的時(shí)候靈光一現(xiàn)可以類比運(yùn)用。
四：適當(dāng)克隆和借鑒，考前備課攢信息
考試前，建議考生翻閱大量的范文，積累一些佳作的結(jié)構(gòu)。如果寫(xiě)記敘文，最好翻閱《讀者》和《青年文摘》，其中一些散文的結(jié)構(gòu)是很好的，適當(dāng)對(duì)其歸納總結(jié)，到考試的時(shí)候，你采用別人的筐，把自己的東西向里面裝就可以了。
另外要關(guān)注去年至今年的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)。
五：篇幅爭(zhēng)取要寫(xiě)滿，多寫(xiě)一點(diǎn)是一點(diǎn)
一般來(lái)說(shuō)，如果作文要求600字左右，那就頂多寫(xiě)到700字。如果是不低于多少字，建議考生合理安排卷面，把卷面寫(xiě)滿到95%左右。
有人問(wèn)：考試作文如果不限文體，那么寫(xiě)詩(shī)歌，寫(xiě)順口溜，寫(xiě)三句半行不行?這個(gè)誰(shuí)也不敢作主，你無(wú)法揣測(cè)閱卷老師的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，冒險(xiǎn)的.收益也許只留給準(zhǔn)備最充分的人。
六：動(dòng)筆之前不要慌，想好題目列提綱
列提綱很關(guān)鍵。比如寫(xiě)記敘文，要設(shè)計(jì)好開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾，同時(shí)要把你敘述的事情分成幾個(gè)層次，中間如果能設(shè)置一個(gè)過(guò)渡句或過(guò)渡段更好。
一個(gè)訓(xùn)練有素的考生，列提綱大約需要5~8分鐘。如果時(shí)間緊張，提綱可以簡(jiǎn)練些。
七：作文成績(jī)看字跡，得分要素是第一
任何形式的作文考試，閱卷老師在打分時(shí)，第一眼看的是字跡。因此，必須要把字寫(xiě)好，不需要多美，但一定不要潦草。
八：考試作文五六段，干凈整潔看卷面
考試作文要注意分段，三四個(gè)段落有些少，八九個(gè)段落則顯得瑣碎。除非有特殊情況，段落應(yīng)以五六個(gè)為好。切忌在一段中寫(xiě)八九行字，寫(xiě)成大肚子作文，這樣會(huì)讓閱卷老師產(chǎn)生視覺(jué)疲勞。
九：想好主題和文體，非驢非馬不可取
無(wú)論記敘文還是議論文，一般來(lái)說(shuō)，多是總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。議論文最好是131或者141結(jié)構(gòu)，當(dāng)然也可以靈活地采用夾敘夾議的手法。注意，議論文不能說(shuō)了那么多事例卻不歸納主題，而記敘文不能議論過(guò)多而忘記說(shuō)事例。
十：作文首尾要精彩，豐富多彩出亮點(diǎn)
考試作文的開(kāi)頭方法很多：六要素開(kāi)頭法、題記開(kāi)頭法、懸念開(kāi)頭法、引名句開(kāi)頭法、排比句開(kāi)頭法、擬人式開(kāi)頭法、設(shè)問(wèn)式開(kāi)頭法、對(duì)偶式開(kāi)頭法、合用修辭開(kāi)頭法、巧述典故開(kāi)頭法、解題式開(kāi)頭法、詩(shī)文引用開(kāi)頭法希望考生們準(zhǔn)備好一些關(guān)于道德、學(xué)習(xí)、禮儀、愛(ài)國(guó)、美德等方面的典故、名人名言，用得上。
一般來(lái)說(shuō)，結(jié)尾是總結(jié)全文。如果是記敘文，要注意抒情;如果是議論文，要注意歸納。無(wú)論如何，最好要扣準(zhǔn)標(biāo)題。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧5
1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒(méi)有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。
例如下面這個(gè)例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
Large對(duì)一個(gè)farm來(lái)說(shuō)就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來(lái)替換。
例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
雅思寫(xiě)作長(zhǎng)句技巧三：選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)
選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。雖然語(yǔ)法的多樣性也很重要，但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)可以參考的原則：
1.一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中最重要的意思。
例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
從意思上來(lái)分析，上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表達(dá)這個(gè)概念時(shí)，原句用的主語(yǔ)是situation，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是was，不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)概念，可以改為下面這句話：
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2.避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu)。
例如下面的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改為：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更簡(jiǎn)潔的句式為：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3.把從句改為短語(yǔ)或單詞。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm,which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an areathat was remote.
簡(jiǎn)介的表達(dá)方式為：
The dairy farm was located in a remotearea, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)而不是主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，才使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
例如：In the fall, not only did the cows haveto be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather'sfamily.
本句不夠簡(jiǎn)潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”，而使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)後，彷佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)更簡(jiǎn)潔一些：
In the fall, my grandfather's family notonly milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
5.用更為精確的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。
例如：My grandfather didn't have time tostand around doing nothing with his school friends.
Stand around doing nothing其實(shí)可以用一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)表達(dá)，即loiter：
My grandfather didn't have time toloiter with his school friends.
6.有時(shí)兩句話的信息經(jīng)過(guò)組合完全可以用一句話來(lái)簡(jiǎn)練地表達(dá)。
例如：Profits from the farm were not large.Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They werenot sufficient to pay for a university degree.
兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡(jiǎn)潔的句子：
Profits from the farm were sometimes toosmall to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧6
托福寫(xiě)作高分技巧
方法1：壓縮審題的時(shí)間
如果說(shuō)獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作是閉卷考試，那么你花上3～5分鐘的時(shí)間去審題，去構(gòu)思，是很必要的。但是，實(shí)際情況是，獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作是開(kāi)卷考試，首先題庫(kù)公開(kāi)，它的題型和題材都不會(huì)超出題庫(kù)的范圍，你總會(huì)在題庫(kù)中找到類似的題目，加之機(jī)經(jīng)的強(qiáng)大力量，使得托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作真的成了開(kāi)卷考試。既然是開(kāi)卷考試，大家就應(yīng)該把審題的工作放到考試之前做，爭(zhēng)取在1分鐘之內(nèi)完成，不要浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，把時(shí)間用來(lái)打字，而不是思考上面。那些思維風(fēng)暴、切題思路之類的，應(yīng)該是事先已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備過(guò)，訓(xùn)練過(guò)的。如果考到了從來(lái)沒(méi)接觸過(guò)的題，只能說(shuō)明沒(méi)有準(zhǔn)備到位，如果審題時(shí)間超過(guò)了2 分鐘，那么準(zhǔn)備也沒(méi)有到位，這就是開(kāi)卷考試的備考思維，滿分不是臨場(chǎng)發(fā)揮出來(lái)的，而是準(zhǔn)備出來(lái)的。
方法2：提煉自己的模板
假設(shè)你的文章字?jǐn)?shù)是 400字，那么你大概要寫(xiě)40～50個(gè)句子。把這40～50個(gè)句子，排成編號(hào)，從第1個(gè)到第40個(gè)，也就是從文章的第一句話到最后一句話，你都知道要寫(xiě)什么，并且知道怎么寫(xiě)，甚至每個(gè)句子你都掌握了2～3個(gè)漂亮的句式，這樣你還擔(dān)心自己拿不到高分嗎?再假設(shè)，這40～50個(gè)句子，你有50%都已經(jīng)是固定句式了，也就是成了自己的寫(xiě)作套路，那么你還愁文章寫(xiě)不完么?比如說(shuō)，在文章最后一句話 說(shuō) ：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that……+觀點(diǎn)，給個(gè)真題例子：In a word， it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.用一句話說(shuō)，簡(jiǎn)單地認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師是相當(dāng)膚淺的。大家想一想，任何事情simply say都可以說(shuō)是相當(dāng)膚淺的。因此這句話就是一句比較萬(wàn)能的結(jié)束語(yǔ)。
方法3：壓縮題庫(kù)
題庫(kù)中一共有185個(gè)題目，如果說(shuō)每個(gè)題目都準(zhǔn)備一篇范文是相當(dāng)不可取的，效率太低，完全沒(méi)有必要，壓縮題庫(kù)的方法主要有2種：A.將題庫(kù)分類。每個(gè)分類寫(xiě)1～2篇就可以解決這個(gè)類的題目。 B.文章之間的互相轉(zhuǎn)化。
托福綜合寫(xiě)作備考3大常見(jiàn)誤區(qū)
所謂的托福綜合寫(xiě)作就是大家在托福考試作文部分要完成的第一部分。先給你兩分鐘時(shí)間閱讀材料，緊接著聽(tīng)一篇材料(材料內(nèi)容與閱讀內(nèi)容相關(guān))。最后，大家的任務(wù)就是根據(jù)前面兩份材料所獲得的信息寫(xiě)一篇200詞左右的文章，文章內(nèi)容是對(duì)前面兩份材料的總結(jié)。聽(tīng)起來(lái)很簡(jiǎn)單哦!確實(shí)，相比于獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作，綜合寫(xiě)作是托福寫(xiě)作中相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單的一部分，這也導(dǎo)致很多童鞋并不注重這部分的練習(xí)，考出來(lái)的分?jǐn)?shù)往往不夠理想。還有相當(dāng)一部分童鞋們，在備考過(guò)程中沒(méi)有仔細(xì)查看各項(xiàng)要求，在綜合寫(xiě)作部分走入了很大的誤區(qū)。今天，小編就來(lái)為大家總結(jié)一下托福綜合寫(xiě)作部分幾大常見(jiàn)的誤區(qū)。
誤區(qū)一、字?jǐn)?shù)超出會(huì)扣分
很多同學(xué)在綜合寫(xiě)作部分都會(huì)緊扣200詞這一數(shù)字，認(rèn)為超出這一數(shù)字會(huì)導(dǎo)致扣分。其實(shí)不然，在托福官方指南中，關(guān)于綜合寫(xiě)作的字?jǐn)?shù)要求描述如下：Suggested length is between 150 and 225 words. You will not be penalized if you write more, so long as what you write answers the question.根據(jù)以上文字描述，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，字?jǐn)?shù)并不是綜合寫(xiě)作當(dāng)中的扣分項(xiàng)，重要的是根據(jù)兩段材料把問(wèn)題闡釋清楚。
誤區(qū)二、套用模板
模板是中國(guó)考生在備考托福中不可避免接觸到的一大內(nèi)容，不可否認(rèn)，模板在初學(xué)階段可以讓我們迅速地了解文章結(jié)構(gòu)，引導(dǎo)我們學(xué)習(xí)如何去寫(xiě)一篇托福綜合寫(xiě)作。但是，托福的綜合寫(xiě)作只有區(qū)區(qū)兩百個(gè)詞左右，大家不妨回頭看看自己的模板，一旦套用模板，真正需要你自己書(shū)寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容就相當(dāng)有限了。在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)，如果把大量的時(shí)間花在回憶模板、書(shū)寫(xiě)模板上，勢(shì)必會(huì)導(dǎo)致文章質(zhì)量的下降。這樣的文章，與其說(shuō)是綜合寫(xiě)作，不如說(shuō)是對(duì)兩份材料的一個(gè)固定套路總結(jié)，是十分不可取的做法。
誤區(qū)三、聽(tīng)力材料聽(tīng)得不仔細(xì)
很多參加托福的考試考生對(duì)于綜合寫(xiě)作的聽(tīng)力部分都是抱著“差不多”的心態(tài)，只求聽(tīng)懂大意即可，這種行為是萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不可取的!綜合寫(xiě)作的聽(tīng)力材料內(nèi)容較之聽(tīng)力部分簡(jiǎn)單一些，但考試對(duì)這兩部分聽(tīng)力的要求卻截然不同。在聽(tīng)力部分，考生只需要對(duì)材料中有用的考點(diǎn)聽(tīng)出來(lái)，并能準(zhǔn)確答題即可。綜合寫(xiě)作的聽(tīng)力則與之完全不同，對(duì)聽(tīng)到內(nèi)容要求更高、更細(xì)致，要能夠根據(jù)聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容總結(jié)聽(tīng)力材料所要表述的邏輯，這對(duì)聽(tīng)力的要求必然提高，要求考生做到“精聽(tīng)、細(xì)聽(tīng)”，而非考生認(rèn)為的“差不多就行”。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧7
一般文章為4-5段，平均每段用時(shí)5-10分鐘
備注：建議考生在大作文寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要寫(xiě)結(jié)論段，以體現(xiàn)文章的完整性。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧8
比較具體的描寫(xiě)會(huì)讓文章看起來(lái)更有說(shuō)服力，分?jǐn)?shù)當(dāng)然能提高啦!
例如：
1、Poor：My supervisor went past my desk.
Better：My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、Poor：She is a careful shopper.
Better：She compares prices and quality.
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧四：不要使用語(yǔ)言過(guò)長(zhǎng)且累贅的詞語(yǔ)
寫(xiě)作不是用的詞匯越高深就越高分，想提高成績(jī)就要用詞簡(jiǎn)單、生動(dòng)。
例如：
1、Wordy：My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
Improved：My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2、Wordy：We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
Improved：We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3、Redundant：We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
Improved：We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4、Redundant：My sister and I bought the same， identical dress in different stores.
Improved：My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧五：避免陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)
雅思是一門(mén)語(yǔ)言考試，主要考察烤鴨們的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，而寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)就在文章的表現(xiàn)力上!
例如：
1、Weak：They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
Improved：They will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、Weak：I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
Improved：I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
雅思考試寫(xiě)作范文：媒體對(duì)觀念的影響
The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Model Answer:
The mass media have a powerful influence in shaping our lives. We have come to depend on them for information and entertainment, and in doing so we let them affect important aspects of our lives.
The undeniable usefulness of the media in almost instantly providing information about events around the world is largely taken for granted. But in our dependence on the media we have allowed them to mould our notions and opinions of events, places and people. Though few of us probably think about it, our conceptions of, say, our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never meet prime ministers or presidents, but anyone who is regularly exposed to the media will have an opinion of them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will make our decision based on how the media portray the candidates. We are similarly swayed by coverage of wars. The media, representing the values of their owners, societies and governments, tend to report wars with a bias; which is the 'good' side and which the 'bad' is determined for us by reporters, editors and commentators, and sure enough the public begins to form opinions that reflect the coverage they see, hear and read in the major media.
The media are also influential in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and lifestyle. The so-called 'global youth culture', in which one finds young people around the world displaying a common interest in music, clothing styles and films, is an example of the media's enormous sway in this regard. A popular figure such as Michael Jackson would never be so well known were it not for the media's extensive reach into every society on the globe.
Thus I would argue that the mass media's influence is certainly great. Indeed, with technological advancements such as the Internet bringing even more forms of electronic media to our homes and workplaces, it is likely the media's influence will grow even stronger.
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧9
審題是有效完成任務(wù)的第一步，也是最關(guān)鍵的一步。從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)看，審題的正確與否與“Task Response”有著直接的聯(lián)系。而在當(dāng)前模板泛濫，文章千篇 一律的大環(huán)境下，有效審題是突破六分的一條準(zhǔn)繩。不少考生在審題時(shí)，要么蜻蜓點(diǎn)水、草草一讀，要么只關(guān)注題目中詞的同義轉(zhuǎn)換。如此讀題，都有可能對(duì)之后的文章撰寫(xiě)方向造成偏差。而建議考生采取的有效的讀題方法應(yīng)為：
通讀題目，了解大意。
細(xì)讀題目，分析句子間的邏輯關(guān)系。
再讀題目，辨別關(guān)鍵詞，區(qū)分主題詞和限定詞，推測(cè)考官的出題意圖。
由于大部分考生只作到了讀題的第一步，所以出現(xiàn)離題或部分離題的可能性很大。以下面這個(gè)考題為例：
There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
通讀題目，了解大意。
當(dāng)前有越來(lái)越多的工人在家里工作，有越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生在家里學(xué)習(xí)。這是因?yàn)殡娔X技術(shù)越來(lái)越容易獲得，也越來(lái)越便宜了。你認(rèn)為這是個(gè)正面的還是負(fù)面的發(fā)展趨勢(shì)?
備注：題中的accessible有不少考生不理解，對(duì)審題的準(zhǔn)確性會(huì)造成一定影響。
細(xì)讀題目，分析句子間的邏輯關(guān)系。
要把握題目中的句子間邏輯關(guān)系，關(guān)鍵是能讀懂代詞“this”; “it”的具體指代。
“this”是指第一句話。
“it”可理解為前兩句所呈現(xiàn)的這一現(xiàn)象。為了使文章寫(xiě)作方向更為明確，這里可把it 概括為：
The wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home
再讀題目，辨別關(guān)鍵詞，區(qū)分主題詞和限定詞，推測(cè)考官的出題意圖。
主題詞：Computer technology in working or studying from home
限定詞：positive or negative
不容忽視的詞：easily accessible and cheaper
題目信息解構(gòu)：
(topic) positive(benefits)
Computer technology in working or studying from home
↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)
Easily accessible and cheaper
對(duì)題目做出如上分析，確保撰寫(xiě)的文章能包含以上的信息，審題這關(guān)絕對(duì)能過(guò)。
以上用時(shí)不超過(guò)3分鐘。
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧10
思寫(xiě)作高分技巧一：避免使用語(yǔ)言弱的“be”動(dòng)詞
1、在“here”或“there”開(kāi)頭的句子中，把“be”動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫(xiě)句的主語(yǔ)
例如：
1) Weak：There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision：No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) Weak：Here are the books you ordered.
Revision：The books you ordered have arrived.
2、表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)
例如：
Weak：The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
Revision：The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語(yǔ))
Or：The landscape， bare and brown， begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ))
3、作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞
例如：
1) Weak：The team members are good players.
Revision：The team members play well.
2) Weak：One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
Revision：One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧二：表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)化為不同的修飾語(yǔ)
很多烤鴨不明白什么時(shí)候用主動(dòng)，什么被動(dòng)!用錯(cuò)了，雅思寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高!這樣做，也是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)原因!
例如：
1、Weak：The organization has been supported by charity.
Better：Charity has supported the organization.
2、Weak：The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
Better：Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧11
GRE寫(xiě)作：高分技巧
1. 熟練掌握新GRE寫(xiě)作題庫(kù)：
為了達(dá)到公平，ETS公布了它考試的所有寫(xiě)作題庫(kù)，那么為了達(dá)到能和native speaker一起競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，考生應(yīng)該在考前對(duì)所有題目都進(jìn)行預(yù)習(xí)(節(jié)約考試時(shí)的審題時(shí)間)，并通過(guò)100-150個(gè)提綱的寫(xiě)作了解GRE寫(xiě)作的一般結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)30-50篇寫(xiě)作來(lái)練習(xí)自己的寫(xiě)作思路和表達(dá)。對(duì)題庫(kù)中的題目越熟練，對(duì)考試越有利。
2. 新GRE寫(xiě)作迎合評(píng)卷人的評(píng)卷思路：
每個(gè)評(píng)卷人對(duì)你文章的評(píng)閱非?？?，不可能對(duì)每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)都很仔細(xì)地去看?？忌鷳?yīng)該迎合評(píng)卷人的評(píng)卷思路，用最規(guī)范的結(jié)構(gòu)和最清晰的表達(dá)來(lái)體現(xiàn)自己的思路：首段要鮮明地提出觀點(diǎn)，中間段落層次要拉開(kāi)，每段的開(kāi)始應(yīng)該就是該段的topic sentence。
3. 新GRE寫(xiě)作的評(píng)分注重三方面
首先，從ETS公布的各分?jǐn)?shù)段評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)看，其評(píng)分主要注重以下三個(gè)方面：①、邏輯分析能力(要求insightful);②、文章的組織(要求well-organized);③、語(yǔ)言能力(要求standard written English; concise; varied structure等)。
4. 盡量提高AI部分的寫(xiě)作能力而力保AA部分滿分
由于AA的寫(xiě)作不牽涉自己觀點(diǎn)的展開(kāi)，只須指出作者邏輯上的漏洞，因此在經(jīng)過(guò)訓(xùn)練以后，寫(xiě)起來(lái)并不困難;而AI的寫(xiě)作需要自己展開(kāi)自己設(shè)立的觀點(diǎn)，不但需要邏輯上的洞察能力，還需要論證觀點(diǎn)的能力，語(yǔ)言組織的能力，因此對(duì)于中國(guó)考生來(lái)講比較困難，難以短期內(nèi)有較大提高。
GRE寫(xiě)作滿分范文賞析
The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.
”Five years ago, we residents of Morganton voted to keep the publicly owned piece of land known as Scott Woods in a natural, undeveloped state. Our thinking was that, if no shopping centers or houses were built there, Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as a natural parkland. But now that our town planning committee wants to purchase the land and build a school there, we should reconsider this issue. If the land becomes a school site, no shopping centers or houses can be built there, and substantial acreage英畝數(shù),面積would probably be devoted to athletic fields. There would be no better use of land in our community than this, since a large majority of our children participate in sports, and Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as natural parkland.“
This letter to the editor begins by stating the reasons the residents of Morganton voted to keep Scott Woods in an undeveloped state. The letter states that the entire community could benefit from an undeveloped parkland. The residents of the town wanted to ensure that no shopping centers or houses would be built there. This, in turn, would provide everyone in the community with a valuable resource, a natural park.
The letter then continues by addressing the issue of building a school on the land. The author reasons that this would also benefit the entire community as a natural parkland since much of the land would be devoted to athletic fields. The author of the letter comes to the conclusion that building a school on the land would be the best thing for everyone in the community.
This letter is a one-sided argument about the best use of the land known as Scott Woods. The author may be a parent whose child would benefit from a new school, a teacher who thinks a school would boost the community, or just a resident of Morganton. Regardless of who the author is, there are many aspects of this plan that he or she has overlooked or chosen to ignore.
Using a piece of land to build a school is not the same thing as using it for a natural parkland. While all the members of the community could potentially benefit from a parkland, only a percentage of the population would realistically benefit from a new school. The author fails to recognize people like the senior citizens of the community. What interest do they have in a new school? It only means higher taxes for them to pay. They will likely never to and utilize the school for anything. On the other hand, anyone can go to a park and enjoy the natural beauty and peacefulness. The use of the land for a school would destroy the benefit of a park for everyone. In turn, it would supply a school only to groups of people in exactly the right age range, not too young or too old, to reap the benefits.
another point the author stresses is that the use of the land for things like athletic fields somehow rationalizes the destruction of the park. What about children who don't play sports? Without the school, they could enjoy the land for anything. A playing field is a playing field. Children are not going to go out there unless they are into sports. There are many children in schools who are not interested in or are not able to play sports. This is yet another group who will be left out of the grand benefits of a school that the author talks about.
The author's conclusion that ”there would be no better use of land in our community than this...“”is easily arguable. The destruction of Scott Woods for the purpose of building a school would not only affect the ambience of Morganton, it would affect who would and would not be able to utilize the space. If the residents as a whole voted to keep Scott Woods in an undeveloped state, this argument will not sway their decision. The use of the land for a school will probably benefit even less people than a shopping center would. The whole purpose of the vote was to keep the land as an asset for everyone. The only way to do this is to keep it in an undeveloped state. Using the land for a school does not accomplish this.
Comments:
This outstanding response begins somewhat hesitantly; the opening paragraphs summarize but do not immediately engage the argument. However, the subsequent paragraphs target the central flaws in the argument and analyze them in almost microscopic detail.
The writer's main rebuttal points out that “using a piece of land to build a school is not the same thing as using it for natural parkland.” Several subpoints develop this critique, offering perceptive reasons to counter the argument's unsubstantiated assumptions. This is linked to a related discussion that pointedly exposes another piece of faulty reasoning: that using land for athletic fields “rationalizes the destruction of the park.”
The extensively developed and organically organized analysis continues into a final paragraph that takes issue with the argument's conclusion that “there would be no better use of land in our community than this.”
Diction and syntax are varied and sophisticated, and the writer is fully in control of the standard conventions. While there may be stronger papers that merit a score of 6, this response demonstrates insightful analysis, cogent development, and mastery of writing. It clearly earns a 6.
GRE寫(xiě)作滿分范文賞析
“The media (books, film, music, television, for example) tend to create rather than reflect the values of a society.”
The media is important and there are commercials for business reasons and news and entertainment.
For media to become mainstream, it must appeal to many people. The values expressed must be attractive to the audience, otherwise it will not sell. Example of specific media - Televison:
Television rates each show by the number of viewers. Shows that do not have a large audience are usually cancelled and then they can allow time for a new show. Successful shows are duplicated. For example, Star Trek was successful so it is the creation of many new Star Trek shows (Deep Space Nine, Voyager). Veiwers decide which shows stay or leave. What makes a successful or unsuccessful show? Usually if the audience can identify with an actor, or situation, etc. the show will gain popularity. Special effects make shows more interesting; but, if the plot is not acceptable, the show is usually doomed.
Comments:
This response does not analyze the issue. Unlike many other essays at the 1 score level, this response is fairly easy to read and has, more or less, an overall coherence. The writer's position is that media have to “appeal to many people” in order “to become mainstream,” and the brief discussion supports that position. This response was scored a 1 because it does not address the basic issue presented in the topic: do the media create or reflect the values of a society?
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧12
雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧 提分不再難
要知道雅思寫(xiě)作考試中最主要考察大家的是什么，肯定很多同學(xué)會(huì)說(shuō)是語(yǔ)法，詞匯或英語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用能力等，不可否認(rèn)，這些知識(shí)對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作非常的關(guān)鍵，但通過(guò)我這么多年的雅思寫(xiě)作的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)說(shuō)，我認(rèn)為最重要的是要寫(xiě)出真正的英語(yǔ)，也就是說(shuō)盡量少出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的東西，也就是我們常說(shuō)的“Chinglish”。那如何能在短時(shí)間內(nèi)避免出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的錯(cuò)誤呢，最好的方法就是多收集這方面的材料，不要犯類似的錯(cuò)誤。下面是一些同學(xué)在寫(xiě)作中經(jīng)常犯的一些錯(cuò)誤，還有我的分析，希望對(duì)大家能有所幫助。
1. 概念的錯(cuò)誤
在寫(xiě)作中，有類詞語(yǔ)表面上看似乎是對(duì)的,但實(shí)際上卻沒(méi)有表達(dá)出你想要表達(dá)的意思,有時(shí)恰恰適得其反。用這類詞語(yǔ)寫(xiě)成的英語(yǔ)句子常常引起誤解。
① (誤)When we go into society after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
(正)When we start to work after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
“go into society”沒(méi)有漢語(yǔ)“進(jìn)入社會(huì)”的含義。在西方,它是指一個(gè)人到一定的年齡可以開(kāi)始社會(huì)交往,如結(jié)交異性朋友,進(jìn)入某些社交或公共場(chǎng)所等。而漢語(yǔ)“進(jìn)入社會(huì)”一般指學(xué)生中學(xué)或大學(xué)畢業(yè)后參加工作。
② (誤)Left alone in the jungle at night ,she felt very dangerous.
(正)Left alone in the jungle at night, she felt t hat she was in great danger.
“dangerous”與作者要表達(dá)的意思完全相反。說(shuō)某人dangerous,實(shí)際上是說(shuō)他在某一方面對(duì)某人構(gòu)成危脅,而不是處于危險(xiǎn)的境地。這個(gè)詞用錯(cuò),意思就完全變了。原意是“她”感到處于危險(xiǎn)中。
2、搭配不當(dāng)
用詞搭配是我國(guó)學(xué)生學(xué)英語(yǔ)最感棘手的地方,在雅思寫(xiě)作中，這種錯(cuò)誤也是經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的，所以希望大家引起重視，因?yàn)橹形睦锏哪承┰~語(yǔ)在不同的語(yǔ)境里,英語(yǔ)有不同的說(shuō)法,而這些說(shuō)法是約定俗成的,完全是習(xí)慣用法所致,我們稍有不慎,便會(huì)犯錯(cuò)?，F(xiàn)舉一些考生在考試中常犯的錯(cuò)誤:
① (誤)At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
(正)At college, we should acquire as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
“學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)”是學(xué)生寫(xiě)作時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的詞組,但不少學(xué)生都寫(xiě)成learn knowledge,實(shí)際上knowledge是不能與learn搭配的,只能與acquire,obtain,absorb,accumulate ,develop,advance,gain,broaden ,enlarge,impart,derive ，deepen, brush up, digest 等詞搭配使用。
② (誤)In July, they will take part in the final term examinations.
(正)In July, they will take t he final term examinations.
“examination”或“test”不能與“take part in”搭配使用,但可以和attend, have, sit for
,conduct, enter for, get through, pass, fail等詞語(yǔ)用在一起。
3、用詞累贅
由于對(duì)某些詞和詞組的意思缺乏真正的理解或把要表達(dá)的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻譯成英語(yǔ),造成累贅。例如:
① (誤)In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be
Banned.
(正)I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
In my opinion與I think意思完全相同,可以刪去其中的一個(gè)。
② (誤)Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .
(正)Scientist s are trying to find a solution to t he problem of energy shortage.
一個(gè)詞與它的派生詞一起出現(xiàn),造成意思重復(fù),給人以累贅的感覺(jué),改正后的句子變得簡(jiǎn)潔多了。
③ (誤)Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution .
(正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.
Cause和lead to都表原因,同時(shí)使用造成意思重復(fù)。
4、逗號(hào)連接錯(cuò)誤
中國(guó)學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中常常單獨(dú)使用逗號(hào)而不用句號(hào)、分號(hào)、冒號(hào)或連結(jié)詞來(lái)連接兩個(gè)或幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的分句。例如:
① (誤)The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
(正)As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
② (誤)The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns.
(正)While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.
上面兩個(gè)標(biāo)有誤的句子在語(yǔ)法上沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤,它錯(cuò)就錯(cuò)在逗號(hào)的使用不當(dāng)。錯(cuò)誤的根源是學(xué)生受漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣的影響,把漢語(yǔ)逗號(hào)的作用等同于英語(yǔ)逗號(hào)的作用。在漢語(yǔ)中,逗號(hào)可以單獨(dú)使用在并列分句之間。
(1)變成兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句:
The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(2)變成并列句,用逗號(hào)加并列連接:
The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(3)變成并列句,用分號(hào)連接:
The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(4)變成并列句,用分號(hào)加連接性副連接:
The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on lake.
(5)變成并列句,有時(shí)也可以用冒接,這時(shí)第二個(gè)分句解釋說(shuō)明第一個(gè)分句
They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.
(6)變成復(fù)合句:
as the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(7)用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)句子:
The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
看了以上幾點(diǎn)雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧，如果大家在詞匯和語(yǔ)法有一定累積的基礎(chǔ)上，再避免出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的東西，加上觀點(diǎn)的正確性，我想那些基礎(chǔ)差的考生想拿到雅思寫(xiě)作六分，應(yīng)該可以如愿以償?shù)?。最后祝愿大家在新的一年里，能夠順利通過(guò)雅思考試，拿到心中的分?jǐn)?shù)。
雅思考試寫(xiě)作范文：年輕人可以當(dāng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)
Task：The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader,to what extent do you think?
Sample answer：
It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also eligible to take important positions in today’s world.
On the one hand, compared to the young generation,elderly people possess more edges.First and foremost, they have better cognitive skills, such as big-picture thinking and long-term vision. This is because years of work experience and failures teach them to take every aspect into consideration before making important decisions. By contrast, due to alack of social experience, young leaders seem to make shortsighted decisions sometimes. Moreover, since the old have already overcome countless difficulties and challenges prior, they can quickly adjust their mood in turmoil and lift the morale of the whole organisation.
On the other hand, there are two reasons why younger directors are also competent to be leaders in important positions. In the first place, with well-educated backgrounds, young leaders are more likely to have a deep understanding of cultural difference, and they can empathize with other employees and clients much better. Today, empathy plays a key role in retention of talents. For example, it is easy to misunderstand others in a cross-cultural dialogue. When good employees resign,they might take the company’s knowledge with them, which is a brain drain for the company. Secondly, compared with the senior leaders, young directors can apply the latest technology and theory into practice, and this can counteract negative stereotype of management and greatly improve the productivity.
In conclusion, in my opinion, age should not be the criterion when selecting the leader of a company. Anyone who has the leadership can play his or her role in the organization. (280 words)
雅思寫(xiě)作范文：職業(yè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員是榜樣嗎
Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.
Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.
Model Answer:
People everywhere like watching sports. Many top athletes are admired throughout their countries, and some even have fans all around the world. Young people especially, view many athletes as role models and want to emulate the way these stars dress, act and live their lives. While some athletes aren't deserving of their “role model” status, others act like role models and responsible community citizens.
Top athletes get the attention of young people. Most children and teenagers like to follow professional sports. For many of them, star athletes represent heroes, and children want to be like their heroes. This means they will want to play sports, which is good for their health. Playing sports also teaches valuable life lessons such as teamwork, discipline, goal setting, and the realities of dealing with success and failure. Professional athletes demonstrate the importance of working hard to achieve a goal, or practicing regularly to become good at something. This is a good example for children to follow.
However, professional athletes are not always good role models. For one thing, when young athletes reach a level of fame, it comes with media attention, large financial benefits and social attention. This can lead children to believe that money and fame are an important part of sports. Children might focus more on these aspects than on the fun of the game or on the challenge of learning how to play well. Then there are those athletes who behave badly. For example, some cheat to win their games or take drugs to improve their performance. This kind of behaviour sends the wrong message to children.
athletes are people who are held at a lofty place in the society owing to their popularity and wealth. These attributes are what makes people want to look up to them and model various facets of their lives along those of the athletes. We can thus be led to conclude that professional athletes can be very good role models for children, as long as they focus on the positive aspects of playing sports.
雅思考試寫(xiě)作范文：手機(jī)反社會(huì)?
Task：The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?
Sample answer：
Since the first mobile phone was invented, this technology has already changed our lives. However, while it gains its popularity, a lot of criticism also follow. Personally, I believe that it should not be banned.
We cannot avoid the fact that the mobile phone brings much convenience to our lives. In the old times, if we want to contact with a friend in a distant place, we may write a letter, which will take more than half a month before he gets the letter. But with the help of the mobile phone, we can get the connection with our friends in less than 10 seconds. In addition, the mobile phone is able to achieve many features, such as shopping online, GPS, buying tickets and so on, which not only saves our time and spending, but also brings much more entertainment.
at the same time, mobile phone industry creates great quantity of business opportunities. In the past one decade, mobile phones are sold by hundreds, bu thousand, by million and provides unaccountable jobs in the modern world as well. For example, according to a survey, Samsung has made great contribution to Korean’s GDP. However, the mobile phone also has an effect on our physical and mental health. As we all know, if we insist to play digital games on our phones, we may suffer some eye diseases unless we realise its harmfulness. To make thins worse, nowadays many people would prefer to spend their time with some virtual friends rather than keep their families accompanied in reality.
In conclusion, I consider it has more benefits than drawbacks. If the mobile phone is used at a right place and right time, it still can be put into excellent usefulness.(287 words)
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧13
GRE寫(xiě)作：高分必備技巧
一、找準(zhǔn)主題，集中突破
一個(gè)好的主題，通常都是采用滴水映海洋，粒沙藏世界的手法。從一滴水里能看到大海的樣子，從一粒沙中能展現(xiàn)整個(gè)世界，這是多么地不容易呀!但是，好主題通常就是這樣表達(dá)出來(lái)的。每位GRE作文考友專業(yè)背景、準(zhǔn)備時(shí)間與英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)各不一樣，在作文中面臨的問(wèn)題當(dāng)然也不一樣：有些是語(yǔ)言和思想都很出色，有些是有思想但表達(dá)不出來(lái)，有些是英語(yǔ)好但思路打不開(kāi)，一個(gè)作文小組只有幾個(gè)人或者十幾個(gè)人，就能夠看出這些差別來(lái)，用一種統(tǒng)一的方法來(lái)進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)備，未必對(duì)每個(gè)人都意味著高效率。
二、避免低效率低水平
寫(xiě)作能力很強(qiáng)的同學(xué)，通常的一件事會(huì)把握怎樣寫(xiě)，如何寫(xiě)，哪些該祥，哪些該略，哪些該修飾，哪些該平白，駕馭文字的功夫很是了得。文采不是每個(gè)人天生就有的，它是一個(gè)逐步積累、逐步升華、逐步成熟的過(guò)程，需要去大量閱讀、長(zhǎng)期積累、心靈感悟、凝練提取的再創(chuàng)造本領(lǐng)，這要在日常學(xué)習(xí)中逐步提高，很多GRE作文考友干勁十足，一天一篇issue或者argument，但如果基本問(wèn)題不解決而沉溺于題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)中，往往是事倍功半。即使GRE作文考友幫助你修改得很好，但你并不能透徹了解自己語(yǔ)法或者思維方式錯(cuò)誤的根源在哪里，那就只能寄希望于把每一篇改過(guò)的都背下來(lái)然后在考試時(shí)碰上。如果記得不牢或者根本沒(méi)碰上，問(wèn)題就大了。我喜歡實(shí)踐-理論-實(shí)踐這種螺旋式的進(jìn)步方法，先找到問(wèn)題，然后有針對(duì)性地進(jìn)行系統(tǒng)性的學(xué)習(xí)，打好基礎(chǔ);感覺(jué)有提高了再來(lái)實(shí)踐，再發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題再提高。
三、重點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備GRE作文提綱
這一點(diǎn)是承接第二點(diǎn)的。題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)有兩個(gè)問(wèn)題：一是沒(méi)有解決根本問(wèn)題，二是機(jī)會(huì)成本過(guò)高。所謂機(jī)會(huì)成本，就是你花的時(shí)間過(guò)多，而這些時(shí)間本來(lái)可以用來(lái)做更有意義的事情，比如說(shuō)記單詞，學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)法或者看書(shū)開(kāi)拓思路。設(shè)想你英文很差，但你寫(xiě)作很努力，在考試時(shí)又碰上了寫(xiě)過(guò)的題目，你的作文得了5分以上，但verbal只有300多分，人家一眼就能看出你的真實(shí)水平來(lái)。所以我覺(jué)得在打基礎(chǔ)的同時(shí)，要把重點(diǎn)放在提綱也就是思路的準(zhǔn)備上。
四、選擇性地練習(xí)實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫(xiě)作
試想一下，如果你在考試時(shí)面對(duì)題目，最可能使你心慌的是什么?那可能就是這道題沒(méi)見(jiàn)過(guò)，不知從哪下手;如果你想過(guò)了，即使你沒(méi)寫(xiě)過(guò)，你也不會(huì)太緊張。我備考時(shí)只寫(xiě)了兩篇issue和兩篇argument，時(shí)間主要花在熟悉題目上，argument看得少一些，issue看了一半左右，有點(diǎn)輕敵了，如果全看的話就會(huì)更沉著。
GRE寫(xiě)作滿分范文賞析
”It?is?unfortunate?that?today's?educators?place?so?much?emphasis?on?finding?out?what?students?want?to?include?in?the?curriculum?and?then?giving?it?to?them.??It?is?the?educators'?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the?students'?duty?to?study?what?is?presented?to?them.“
Today?some?educators?place?much?emphasis?on?what?students?want,there?is?a?conflict?about?what?is?the?educator's?duty?for?what??educatee?should?get.
Normally,?the?college?or?university?in?our?country?,students?just?study?what?they?are?tought,it?is?the?professor's?duty?to?dermine?what?should?appear?in?the?classroom.Nowday?china?has?taken?the?polices?of?opening?reforming,every?thing?chang?vastly.Students?can't?get?the?job?position?from?goverment?authority?but?must?look?for?the?work?chance?by?themself?,so?students?have?taken?great?care?to?what?they?learn?int?the?college?and?what?kind?of?knowlege?does?the?job?market?need.If?our?high?education?institute?ignore?this?chang?and?keep?the?tranditional?teaching?method,it?will?seem?as?wast?student's?time?and?money?and?the?colleges?will?lost??their?student.
It?may?be?the?best?way?for?the?developing?country?to?reform?their?high?education?system,?especially?with?those?majors?that?closely?connected?with?market?or?industry?application.we?must?give?our?student??most?upcoming?technolegy?or?skill?to?meet?the?need?of?outdoor?of?our?college,the?information?from?students?may?be?the?best?reference?for?the?educator?to?determine?what?they?should?take?to?the?classroom.
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This?essay?displays?little?ability?to?develop?and?organize?a?coherent?response?to?the?topic.
The?essay?takes?the?position?that?China?needs?to?reform?its?traditional?approach?to?curriculum?by?becoming?more?student?centered?and?technologically?current.??However,?the?reader?has?to?work?hard?to?decipher?the?generally?confusing?line?of?reasoning,?which?does?not?obviously?address?the?central?issue?presented?in?the?topic.
There?is?an?attempt?to?organize?the?argument?into?a?three-paragraph?essay,?but?the?one-sentence?introduction?is?simply?a?variation?of?the?topic?statement.??The?brief?body?of?the?essay?does?not?advance?an?opinion?in?a?coherent?manner,?and?the?final?paragraph?shifts?the?focus?to?the?need?for?technology?in?the?curriculum.
The?errors?(comma?splices,?misspellings,?verb?problems,?etc.)?are?so?intrusive?that?coherence?remains?a?problem.
This?essay?would?need?considerable?rewriting?in?order?to?earn?a?higher?score?than?1.
GRE寫(xiě)作滿分范文賞析
”It?is?unfortunate?that?today's?educators?place?so?much?emphasis?on?finding?out?what?students?want?to?include?in?the?curriculum?and?then?giving?it?to?them.??It?is?the?educators'?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the?students'?duty?to?study?what?is?presented?to?them.“
There?are?many?school?violences?in?each?school.??Those?are?big?problems?to?our?govenment?and?social.??School?violences?effect?the?studying?of?students.??This?is?very?serious,?even?some?students?are?nervious?to?go?school.??In?fact,?the?government?must?give?students?a?clean?place?to?study.??Teachers?should?help?students?know?it?is?a?duty?to?study.??So,?everyone?should?face?those?big?problems.
Do?we?know?what?are?students'?ideas???Do?the?educators?try?to?know???Most?educators?hope?the?govenment?can?give?students?more?and?help?them?more.??These?are?people's?hope.??But?it?is?so?unfortunate?that?students?can't?have?a?good?place?to?study.??Also,?teachers?have?to?teach?the?students.??Not?that?students?can?know?what?to?study?by?themself.??In?the?compus,?there?are?many?guys?sell?the?drugs?and?acohol?to?younger?students.??Why?those?guys?can?go?into?the?school???That?is?also?the?main?problem.
When?we?were?little,?we?didn't?know?what?is?correct?and?what?is?wrong.??So?we?lose?ourself?easily.??At?the?same?time,?we?need?much?care?from?parents?and?teachers.??So?our?teachers?and?parents?play?the?important?roles?and?they?own?must?do?better.??Because?some?students?learn?some?bad?habits?from?their?teachers?and?parents.
If?we?want?to?resolve?all?the?problems,?we?must?face?the?problems?and?find?out?the?reasons,?then?try?to?resolve?them.??We?also?must?care?all?students.??If?we?can?help?them,?tring?to?do?our?best.??Then,?the?problems?will?become?less?and?less.
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This?is?a?seriously?flawed?response?to?the?topic.??The?writer?begins?by?discussing?school?violence?and?the?need?for?a?good?place?to?study,?parental?and?teacher?influence,?and?resolution?of?school?problems.??The?issue?of?who?should?determine?the?curriculum,?teachers?or?students,?is?implied?but?not?addressed?directly.??In?fact,?teacher-directed?learning?seems?to?be?a?small?point?in?a?series?of?concerns?related?to?school?violence.??The?development?of?a?position?on?the?issue?is?unfocused?and?disorganized.??Even?the?example,?drug?selling,?relates?to?school?violence?and?not?to?curricular?responsibility.
Language?errors?are?numerous.??Problems?with?correct?use?of?tense,?diction,?word?order,?sentence?structure,?and?subject-verb?agreement?also?interfere?with?meaning.??Had?the?writer?not?included?references?to?teachers?helping?students?know?what?to?study,?the?essay?would?probably?have?received?a?score?of?1?instead?of?a?2.
關(guān)于高分作文的寫(xiě)作小技巧14
高考寫(xiě)作高分技巧
1、嘗試記敘文寫(xiě)作
近幾年作文在文體的選擇上記敘文的數(shù)量非常可憐。而獲得高分的記敘文則更是鳳毛麟角。記敘文寫(xiě)作越來(lái)越少，物以稀為貴在高考中也不例外，試想高考評(píng)卷老師在看倦了議論文時(shí)，突然出現(xiàn)一篇記敘文，自然會(huì)眼前一亮。但前提是要具備寫(xiě)記敘文的能力與才華。
2、運(yùn)用辯證思維
聯(lián)系的觀點(diǎn)、發(fā)展的眼光、一分為二的觀點(diǎn)，是辯證思維的三柄利劍。它可以開(kāi)拓作文思路，避免局限性和片面性。要使思維既深刻又嚴(yán)密，立意過(guò)程中最好的辦法就是運(yùn)用辯證思維分析說(shuō)理。能夠小中見(jiàn)大，淺中見(jiàn)深并且運(yùn)用對(duì)立統(tǒng)一的觀點(diǎn)去立意，文章的基本思路應(yīng)該說(shuō)是很清楚的，如果立論說(shuō)理過(guò)程中更好地運(yùn)用辯證思維的方法分析事物，使說(shuō)理更加縝密，闡述更加深刻而嚴(yán)密，就能使你的文章倍增亮色。作文更加看重考查考生的思維過(guò)程及其嚴(yán)密程度，雖然形式也重要。
此外，觀點(diǎn)不可太絕對(duì)，要留有余地?！傲x正”未必要“辭嚴(yán)”，“理直”未必就要“氣壯”。聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)生活時(shí)，涉及社會(huì)黑暗面時(shí)，要有分寸，不要一味指責(zé)。批評(píng)家長(zhǎng)、老師和社會(huì)要與人為善，抱著協(xié)商與治病救人的態(tài)度，要提建設(shè)性意見(jiàn)。不可尖刻、諷刺、挖苦，甚至惡意地進(jìn)行人身攻擊。
3、全面理解作文材料
所謂全面，是就材料的整體意思去把握材料，不能只抓一點(diǎn)，不及其余。先有全面理解，然后再選角度。分析考生對(duì)題意理解不能全面準(zhǔn)確的原因，主要不是閱讀理解的智力水平不夠，而是非智力因素影響造成的。比如，讀材料的時(shí)間太短，怕作文時(shí)間不夠，所以采用一目十行的速度，用不到一分鐘的時(shí)間審題，粗枝大葉的結(jié)果可想而知。又比如，讀材料時(shí)心猿意馬，注意力不在理解材料上，而是在關(guān)注背好的材料和文章怎樣與題意套聯(lián)。
另外，審題訓(xùn)練，還要注意培養(yǎng)找提示語(yǔ)的能力和方法。
4、行文點(diǎn)面結(jié)合
事例論證是寫(xiě)好議論文的重要方法之一，要用好既典型又生動(dòng)的事例論據(jù)，除了要做到敘例高度概括、敘述為議論服務(wù)等之外，在事例敘述完后，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言提煉出所選取的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)所敘述的事例進(jìn)行分析也是十分重要的。在這方面，同學(xué)們常犯的錯(cuò)誤是：只敘述事例，而不進(jìn)行分析，形成“論據(jù)+論據(jù)=觀點(diǎn)”的錯(cuò)誤形式。其實(shí)用事例論證法寫(xiě)作文好比用磚壘墻，事例是“磚”，而分析議論則是磚與磚之間的“泥”，離開(kāi)這些“泥”，“墻”就不牢固。
5、論證取材歷史
作文中選擇事例時(shí)應(yīng)該著重選擇那些有歷史定論的事例，盡量做到與評(píng)卷老師的觀點(diǎn)一致。這就需要考前積累一些歷史故事。
6、重視擬題
特別要注意不能缺題。不是萬(wàn)不得已，不要以話題做標(biāo)題。擬題是顯示你才氣的一個(gè)平臺(tái)，不能輕易放棄。缺題影響遠(yuǎn)不止2分。正好給了評(píng)卷老師扣分的理由。考生可以記住一個(gè)原則，你所擬定的題目一定要是句子，不能是詞組，通過(guò)題目就能顯示出立意。
7、不要頻繁分段
一篇不足千字的文章有的同學(xué)分了十幾段來(lái)寫(xiě)，這是高考作文的大忌，一般看高考作文分五六段來(lái)寫(xiě)就可以了。
8、努力超過(guò)800字
高考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中有要求，少50字扣1分，并且字?jǐn)?shù)少了作文本身容量就不夠了，尤其是記敘文，800字往往不能把故事講完整，因此，議論文最好寫(xiě)到900字，記敘文可以達(dá)到1200字。
高考作文精美語(yǔ)段大
1、 你是否羨慕過(guò)陶淵明的人生?是啊，他歸隱田園，品鄉(xiāng)間淡酒，觀風(fēng)中寒菊，活得多么瀟灑自在!然而，你是否感受到他內(nèi)心的無(wú)奈?他也有濟(jì)世的抱負(fù)，卻無(wú)從施展，在那個(gè)黑暗的時(shí)代容不下這一錚錚的魏晉風(fēng)骨，于是他在無(wú)盡的無(wú)奈中選擇出世。他的無(wú)奈，他的焦灼，他的傷痛，你懂嗎?
是啊，你未曾看到，你只顧嗅五柳先生舍前寒菊的芬芳，你只顧陶醉于南山的山水，于是你羨慕他們的生命，同時(shí)埋怨自己生命的焦灼與勞累。你何時(shí)才懂得正視自己生命的歡樂(lè)，嗅一下窗欞邊梔子花的芬芳?(《窗欞邊的梔子花》)
2、 李清照在唱什么?我相信她不是在唱“凄凄慘慘戚戚”的秋天，她在感懷春光，春太美，太絢爛;她在傷懷夏日，夏太烈，太決絕;她在痛苦冬天，冬太冷，太徹骨。所有的所有，帶去她先前的安定與快樂(lè)。只有秋天，配合她凄冷的心情，告訴她這世上，另有一季，可作她人生的注腳。(《季節(jié)》)
3、 蘇軾的“缺月掛疏桐”，會(huì)不讓人產(chǎn)生遐思嗎?
朱淑真的“鋪床涼滿梧桐月，月在梧桐缺處明”，不知又有多少人體會(huì)到呢?
李煜的“寂寞梧桐深院鎖清秋”，那月如鉤;何人能不感到秋的冷清呢?
多么凄涼的秋季!多么讓人有情感——傷感的秋季啊!秋季，與梧桐，與綿雨，與缺月合照出一張照片，那張照片存在我們的心中方能永存。那張照片是對(duì)秋季的真實(shí)寫(xiě)照。那梧桐，也許寒鴉也不肯棲;那綿雨，也許大雁也羨慕;那缺月，也許文人墨客在寄托情感。(《季節(jié)》)
4、 當(dāng)你窮困潦倒時(shí)，他向你伸出了援助之手;當(dāng)你失意時(shí)，他為你開(kāi)啟了導(dǎo)航燈，指引著你;當(dāng)你失敗時(shí)，他為你鋪墊了一塊塊基石，讓你走向成功的階梯;當(dāng)你惆悵時(shí)，他為你帶來(lái)了開(kāi)心果;當(dāng)你不幸時(shí)，他為你送來(lái)了幸福的青鳥(niǎo);當(dāng)你……然而，當(dāng)他累倒下，生病躺下時(shí)，你，你又為他送去了什么，帶去了什么?是冷漠，還是倍致的關(guān)懷?(《滴水之恩，你以何報(bào)?》)
5、 遠(yuǎn)離浮躁，回歸母語(yǔ)，我們的靈魂將更加充實(shí)和美麗，先秦的詩(shī)經(jīng)楚辭，魏晉的樂(lè)府雙璧，盛唐兩宋的詩(shī)詞雅韻，明清的小說(shuō)散文，都源源不斷地為精神注入營(yíng)養(yǎng)?！扒嗲嘧玉?，悠悠我心”的求賢者渴：“錦瑟無(wú)端五十弦，一弦一柱思華年”的繾綣情思：“塞上長(zhǎng)城空自許，鏡中衰鬢已先斑”的壯志難酬：“蒼山負(fù)，明燭天南”的瑰麗風(fēng)光都深深地印在我們靈魂深處。(《母語(yǔ)》)
6、 還記得那個(gè)叫李春燕的漢族女子，嫁入苗寨，從此便成了照亮苗家的月亮。她居住的那座吊腳樓，她昏黃燈光下整理欠條的背影，她急步于山寨間行醫(yī)治病的身姿一次次地出現(xiàn)在我的記憶中，時(shí)間越久，越給我長(zhǎng)久的感動(dòng)。她的無(wú)私，她的奉獻(xiàn)，她的堅(jiān)持就如同一朵玫瑰，散發(fā)著大愛(ài)的芬芳，彌漫在記憶里，時(shí)間越久越濃郁。 (《花開(kāi)兩岸》)
7、 這是個(gè)下著小雨的清晨，我們行走在泥濘的山路上。山不高，有溪水流淌而去，寒風(fēng)撲面。
小雨。雨在空中回旋飄飛，密密地打在臉上，冰涼冰涼的。這瀝瀝稀稀的雨，向著遠(yuǎn)處延伸，終于成了一簾白幕，把天地萬(wàn)物遮擋得嚴(yán)嚴(yán)實(shí)實(shí)。我們?cè)谟曛星斑M(jìn)，任這上天賜的甘霖濕透全身每一個(gè)角落，從頭到腳，由嘴到心，那心里有詩(shī)在流淌，它漫過(guò)心坎，靜靜溢出“自在飛花輕似夢(mèng)，無(wú)邊絲雨細(xì)如愁?！?(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
8、 好像從我記事起，爺爺就一直是忙碌的。他背著鋤頭出去侍弄他的農(nóng)田、土地;他在園子里種菜，栽果樹(shù);他去給人家?guī)鸵稽c(diǎn)力所能及的忙……很健康很快樂(lè)很自在地活著。奶奶呢，就在家里喂她的那群雞，吆喝著兩只狗，洗干凈爺爺?shù)囊律眩贿叺戎鵂敔敹嗄瓴蛔兊摹懊睢保骸袄掀抛樱诟墒裁?快煎茶吃!”奶奶就放下手中的活計(jì)，假裝埋怨地說(shuō)：“這么快就回來(lái)休息啦?！比缓蠛苷J(rèn)真地去為爺爺煎茶，端送到爺爺手中，與他坐著一邊喝茶一邊閑談。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
9、 下雨的時(shí)候，雨絲浸潤(rùn)著古巷，籠罩著古巷，仿佛在小心翼翼的為一個(gè)嬰兒洗浴，瓦片上的青苔，含苞的花朵都在欣喜地啜飲天降的甘霖。雨天人們是不怎么出門(mén)的，泡一壺清茶坐在藤椅上，翻翻古老的線裝書(shū)，吟著《雨巷》，也會(huì)有調(diào)皮的孩子在雨中嬉戲，清脆的笑聲如掛在檐角的風(fēng)鈴，美妙悅耳，丁香般的姑娘，舉著油紙傘消失在巷口，留下背影讓人遐想。這里的一切都如一首婉約的詩(shī)，一花一木都充滿了靈氣，營(yíng)造著詩(shī)意的氛圍。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
10、 云朵則是天空的粉妝。清晨的云被染成鮮嫩的粉紅，如初生的嬰兒的臉頰，血色柔和。黃昏的云被鍍上金橙色，如斑斑銹跡，閃耀著孤獨(dú)歲月逝去的光輝。有一個(gè)成語(yǔ)叫做“白云蒼狗”，天空每日便上演著一部《白云蒼狗》的電影，觀眾有稚嫩的孩童，有遲暮的老人，他們從變幻莫測(cè)的云朵中，或找到了童年時(shí)品嘗的甜蜜的棉花糖，或找到了童話故事里云的國(guó)度。(《懷想天空》)
11、 我們的思想像極了徘徊在十字路口的雛鳥(niǎo)。每一個(gè)方向都存在著我們可能的足跡。我們就在豐富多彩的思維方式中不斷拾起或丟掉快樂(lè)。沒(méi)有了思想，快樂(lè)是妄想。有人說(shuō)我們是“垮掉的一代”。我不同意!因?yàn)槲覀冇兴枷耄锰ど喜煌乃季S旅程去找尋快樂(lè)。有人說(shuō)我們是“阿Q”式的新新人類。我不同意!因?yàn)槲覀兊男滤枷氩⒎恰鞍”那般愚昧麻木。我們快樂(lè)，我們的快樂(lè)是靈動(dòng)的左手;我們思考，我們的思維方式是理性的右手。思維拐錯(cuò)了彎，便會(huì)進(jìn)入快樂(lè)的墓地。當(dāng)左手右手相遇，合適地交融，那便是詩(shī)意的地棲居。(《左手。右手》)
12、 而茶，生于幽谷陰坡之上，浸潤(rùn)和風(fēng)細(xì)雨的輕柔，吸取月華星輝的清幽，氤氳著若有若無(wú)的山嵐野露，骨子里都透著股恬淡。而后細(xì)采嫩葉，細(xì)細(xì)手工研制。等到夜深入靜，新月如鉤，一壺紫砂，一注熱水，高低緩就，慢慢沖泡。也不急，等著水氣漸散，再一個(gè)人去細(xì)細(xì)地品舌尖上的一股恬淡，隱隱地感覺(jué)那一抹幽香融了月色山情：匯入了一片思緒的空白中，所以好飲茶的東方人，恬淡睿智，每個(gè)人都是哲人，都是思想者。
做人如飲茶，用微微淡漠，游絲般的幽香，給思緒給生活以更多的空間方可恬淡自如，從容不迫。(《空白中的獨(dú)舞》)
13、 而中國(guó)的畫(huà)家，則會(huì)在一卷長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的宣紙上，在大片的空白中，隱隱繪出那些寂寥的山，而后就只有一片孤單的葉，無(wú)助地停留在大片的空白中，就像它孤獨(dú)地飄蕩在天地。有窮之描繪展現(xiàn)無(wú)限之情懷。而這其中，空白，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單而深邃的形式，便承擔(dān)起此重任。利用虛無(wú)而又充實(shí)的載體去負(fù)擔(dān)一個(gè)天馬行空，情溢天地的境地。
這是智者的抉擇。興許人心如畫(huà)，有時(shí)一點(diǎn)空白便要隱匿大大世界，而洞明世事之人，在于頓悟那一片的空白。(《空白中的獨(dú)舞》)
14、 泰戈?duì)栒f(shuō)過(guò)，死之烙印將生命本真烙在生之硬幣上，使它去購(gòu)買那些真正有價(jià)值的東西。惟有詩(shī)意地生活，才能清明淡然的看待紛爭(zhēng)的世界，讓煩擾不再。
千舸過(guò)盡，一片汪洋，采石磯孤獨(dú)地清點(diǎn)倒影，濁浪便是一杯煮過(guò)的酒，李白這一喝，便醉了一部唐代編年史。仗劍天涯的李白，選擇了詩(shī)意地生活，于是便讓歷史留下了青蓮居士灑脫的身影，一匹青驢，一襲青衫，讓李白找尋到了生命本真的快樂(lè)。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
15、 穿越莊周夢(mèng)蝶的翩躚，超脫老子騎青牛而過(guò)的函谷險(xiǎn)塞，踏過(guò)孔子腳下不逝的東流之水，詩(shī)意地生活，驀然回首，生命微笑。書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷的杜甫，選擇了詩(shī)意的生活，于是便讓汗青里多了一位詩(shī)中圣哲?？v然是“飄飄何所似，天地一沙鷗”的凄苦;縱然是“老病有孤舟”“憑軒涕泗流”的悲涼;縱然是“卷我屋上三重茅”“高者掛罥長(zhǎng)林梢”的窘境;少陵亦不改己志，用一支如椽巨筆，還原了歷史本像與民生疾苦，一只小船，一席涼被，讓杜甫探實(shí)到了生命的價(jià)值與意義。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
16、 詩(shī)意地生活在這古巷里，聽(tīng)鄰家女孩的淺吟低唱，聽(tīng)燕子交頸的呢喃?？赐デ暗幕ㄩ_(kāi)花落，望天上的云卷云舒，到黃昏，在夕陽(yáng)下漫步，只嘆“夕陽(yáng)無(wú)限好”，不管近不近黃昏。折一枝垂柳插在蓄滿清水的瓶中，尖尖的嫩芽像嶄新的剛剛萌發(fā)的夢(mèng)，鏡子里是一片如花笑靨，花面交相映，保留一份童心，保留一片純凈，去感受生活的美好，像寫(xiě)詩(shī)一樣去醞釀每一分情感，是古巷人們的共同特征。我熱愛(ài)這片土地。這里純凈的心靈與天空，連空氣的味道都有棉花糖的香，待白發(fā)蒼蒼時(shí)，請(qǐng)故鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)再把我?guī)Щ卮说兀狄磺嵰?，?shī)意地生活在這里，以終余年。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
17、 我知道，你熱愛(ài)生活，尤為鐘愛(ài)鋼琴，高山流水間，一曲天籟踏著行云流水般的步子悠悠飄來(lái)，淡淡地，被晨風(fēng)吹散了些，被夜霧浸濕了些，又被沿途的樹(shù)葉遮擋了些，淺淺的悠來(lái)，跳躍的五線譜醉迷了你的心志，于是，你毫不猶豫地選擇了它，靜靜地用心將其栽種在自己的那方“自留地”里，因?yàn)槟銗?ài)，所以你暗下決心，因?yàn)槟銗?ài)，所以你磨破雙指亦不言棄，因?yàn)槟銗?ài)，所以任著淚汗一起流，所以滴落于黑白琴鍵彈起你生命的獨(dú)特之音。(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
18、 好一塊無(wú)字碑，好一個(gè)武則天，她在那片白上描繪出了一個(gè)女子的廣闊胸襟與明智。她知道自己得到了太多，多得讓每一個(gè)人都忌妒;她也失去了太多，多得中華五千年的文明都無(wú)法乘載她的悲哀。一切盡在不言中，留一點(diǎn)空白，讓后世子孫揣摩她內(nèi)心的驕傲與哀傷。(《無(wú)字碑歌》)
19、 當(dāng)我在父母的希冀中成長(zhǎng)，優(yōu)秀便成了一種習(xí)慣。他們無(wú)法容忍平庸，所以我不得不走向牢籠。他們安排著我的世界，不留一點(diǎn)空白給我。爸爸說(shuō)，你一定是最棒的，可是他不知道，我不要做最棒的，我不想在奧數(shù)之中徜徉，也不想在字母里面徘徊。我只要，我只要一條縫隙，只構(gòu)筑我的世界;我只愿，我只愿有一點(diǎn)空白，讓我自己涂鴉。(《我只要一條縫隙》)
20、 清晨起來(lái)，品一杯清茗，手捧一本《歸去來(lái)兮辭》，讓千百年前的悠悠山風(fēng)，伴隨著自己的精神，放飛到自己靜謐、溫馨的心靈田園，讓自己的心沉淀、沉淀，在現(xiàn)代都市的躁動(dòng)之中收獲一份世外的寧?kù)o。這難道不是在詩(shī)意地生活嗎?(《詩(shī)意地生活》)
21、 阮籍目睹世間的渾噩不堪和好友的身首異處，借醉酒逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)。他的一生一直在逃避、逃避、逃避，卻終因一篇《為鄭沖對(duì)晉王箋》被人唾棄。嵇康則完全生活在現(xiàn)實(shí)之中，不肯向生活做出任何妥協(xié)，最終一曲《廣陵散》成為絕響。其實(shí)人生由阮籍的醉酒向前一步便是嵇康的《廣陵散》，人生由嵇康的《廣陵散》向后退一步便是阮籍的醉酒，殊途同歸的境遇竟是如此迥異。若是兩人各向中間邁出一步，將幻想與現(xiàn)實(shí)稍加中和，也許就不會(huì)落得生者隱入迷幻，死者融入蒼穹，只留給后人無(wú)盡的悵惘。(《夢(mèng)想在現(xiàn)實(shí)中起舞》)
22、 張?jiān)屎拖壬嗍且晃恢腔鄣睦先?，她一生?jīng)歷了大富大貴，也經(jīng)歷了戰(zhàn)火紛飛、十年浩劫，而她卻永遠(yuǎn)保有一副悲天憫人的情懷、一顆永不衰老的童心。她那悲天憫人的情懷使她正視現(xiàn)實(shí)并戰(zhàn)勝現(xiàn)實(shí)，而她那顆永不衰老的童心則使她在任何艱難的情況下都不放棄幻想和權(quán)利。(《夢(mèng)想在現(xiàn)實(shí)中起舞》)
23、一個(gè)人、一方冢、一生探求。
山如黛、沙如風(fēng)。山還是那隱隱的青山，還是那沉淀著中華文明的青色，只是少了位從群山中走出來(lái)的佳人。沙還是意欲吞人的黃沙，還是那隔著中原與塞外的飛沙，只是多了位從中原走出來(lái)的佳人——昭君。人人都說(shuō)塞外凄苦，那兒的人殺人如麻，但你不怕。沒(méi)有親身經(jīng)歷，道聽(tīng)途說(shuō)，可信嗎?于是你毅然踏上了出塞的馬車，一路微笑，你要用行動(dòng)向世人證明：世上的事，要親身探看，方可相信。事實(shí)證明，你贏了。塞外荒涼，但民風(fēng)純樸。你的躬行，為歷史畫(huà)上了最濃重的一筆。
昭君，沒(méi)有被表面迷住了雙眼，你親手用躬行打造了自己的未來(lái)。真哉——絕知此事要躬行。(《絕知此事要躬行》)
24、高唱赤壁東風(fēng)，你瀟灑成千堆雪。
墳崗茫茫，醉射天狼，楊花愁點(diǎn)五分，三分雄風(fēng)浩蕩，蘇軾之才，自不必說(shuō)，但讓我五體投地的不是他的才華，而是那一句“事不目見(jiàn)耳聞而臆斷其有無(wú)，可乎?”石鐘山的得名多有說(shuō)法，卻沒(méi)有一個(gè)人去躬身探求，除了他。他沒(méi)有被表象所迷惑，沒(méi)有被前人所擾，只是默默地驗(yàn)證。好一個(gè)蘇軾，只為他的躬行，我五體投地。蘇軾的躬行，也許只是歷史的插曲，但其人格由此可見(jiàn)。偉哉，絕知此事要躬行!(《絕知此事要躬行》)
25、周瑜在軍營(yíng)帳篷里來(lái)回踱著步，一只飛蛾在案臺(tái)上的火燭旁飛來(lái)飛去。帳篷里忽暗忽明，帳篷門(mén)口站崗的士兵嘆了口氣，他明白帳篷里的人一定正被什么事煩惱著，但同時(shí)他也明白像他這樣的小人物又怎能替得了一個(gè)東吳大將著想?此時(shí)，簾幡被掀開(kāi)了，周瑜從里面走了出來(lái)，一身的銀甲在月光的照耀下閃閃發(fā)光。他的臉上沒(méi)有表情，看上去像是在猶豫什么，又好像是下定了決心。周瑜就這樣站了很久，旁邊的士兵也只好就這樣陪他站著。一時(shí)間，天地顯得無(wú)限寬廣，星星滿布在黑色的夜空中，就好似一顆顆珍珠撒落在了黑色的綢緞上。周瑜開(kāi)始回想起幾天前的事來(lái)……(《箭鋒上的友誼》)
26、追溯著世界的旅途，我看到了麥哲倫環(huán)游世界的夢(mèng)想，他用廣闊的胸懷迎接波瀾壯闊的波濤，用夢(mèng)想書(shū)寫(xiě)著生命的厚重與責(zé)任?？v使行程中的他遭到土著人的屠戮，現(xiàn)實(shí)的殘酷卻沒(méi)有將他的夢(mèng)想抹殺削弱。后人沿著他夢(mèng)想的軌跡，走向世界。收回目光，我看到了馬丁。路德金的夢(mèng)想，丑陋而頑固的現(xiàn)實(shí)一次又一次打擊著這位“追夢(mèng)者”，但他的夢(mèng)想凝集了所有黑人的正義和力量，現(xiàn)實(shí)，終于因他的執(zhí)著而跪拜在這一偉大民族戰(zhàn)士的腳下。我又看到了徐本禹樸實(shí)無(wú)華的笑容，他沒(méi)有像自己的同學(xué)一樣追求花前月下香車寶馬，更沒(méi)有因現(xiàn)實(shí)的殘缺而逃遁，而是傾自己的夢(mèng)想于偏遠(yuǎn)支教之中。他們，都是現(xiàn)實(shí)中堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的追夢(mèng)者!(《相遇在夢(mèng)想與現(xiàn)實(shí)的軌跡中》)
27、庭院深深，月光如水一般地傾瀉而下，讓皎潔覆蓋在廣大的土地上。粉蝶孤寂，燭光沉默在你憂愁密布的臉上，凝滯不開(kāi)，猶如《雨巷》中撐著雨傘，結(jié)著像丁香一樣憂傷的愁結(jié)的女孩。
和親的隊(duì)伍終于浩浩蕩蕩地出發(fā)了，載著你的思念、你的眷顧，駛向了遠(yuǎn)方。
沒(méi)人知曉，你淡妝素面地走來(lái)，一句“我去!”讓多少官員如釋重負(fù)地笑了，讓多少宮女在羞愧中低下了頭沉默不語(yǔ)。
落日溶金，暮云四合，晚霞帶著無(wú)盡的沉思，落在了那片青冢，云無(wú)語(yǔ)，草也沉默;落在了那片空白，讓人憶起了你，用縷縷青絲熬成了白發(fā)滄桑，用自己的明眸點(diǎn)染了那一方凈土，那一方空靈，那一方空白，那一道風(fēng)景。(《揀盡空白，終見(jiàn)風(fēng)景》)
28、 琵琶女“此時(shí)無(wú)聲勝有聲”，引得那個(gè)江州司馬青衫濕，何等契合，不需過(guò)多的傾訴，那一瞬間，也許我們也會(huì)穿越百年時(shí)空，仿佛面前坐著個(gè)抱著琵琶潸然淚下的女子，同情，哀愁，凄清，柔美，這一切無(wú)限的情思，又豈是那幾個(gè)字所能表現(xiàn)的?智者總是在有意無(wú)意之間，給人們一點(diǎn)空間，給人們一點(diǎn)空白，那個(gè)部分，才是人人共有的財(cái)富，那份空白，才會(huì)巧妙將不同的人，不同的事如穿針引線般串聯(lián)起來(lái)。(《點(diǎn)點(diǎn)空白，悠悠情思》)
29、“寶玉，你好……”黛玉在紅消香斷的盡頭拼盡全勁的話讓人們猜之思之。如若直接喊出“你好狠”或“你好自為之”之類的話，我想《紅樓夢(mèng)》的意蘊(yùn)一定全無(wú)。正是這“好”后的空白讓人們揣想深悟，才不致流于俗套。似乎中國(guó)文學(xué)傳統(tǒng)對(duì)此道已深諳。
像沈從文先生《邊城》里的儺送的回與不回，余秋雨先生《垂釣者》中瘦老人釣魚(yú)否，都有同樣的留點(diǎn)空白讓人回味的意趣。
文學(xué)中的空白，發(fā)人深思。無(wú)怪乎有人說(shuō)黛玉的一句不盡之言已將《紅樓夢(mèng)》的精華囊括呢!(《月瀉樹(shù)叢中》)
30、林則徐被貶伊犁，他的寂寞豈是常人能及，但他卻高唱“茍利國(guó)家生死以，豈因禍福避趨之?！痹旄Ａ艘环桨傩?。韓愈被發(fā)配潮州，愛(ài)女死于途中。他的寂寞悲嘆卻化為了治國(guó)的動(dòng)力，他在那個(gè)邊遠(yuǎn)小城興教育，修水利，受到所有百姓的擁戴，那潮州的山水竟盡姓了韓。
他們的細(xì)雨不止于沾濕了衣裳，更落在了厚重的土地，滋潤(rùn)了一方水土;他們的閑花也不止于鋪滿路面，更深嵌土地，“化作春泥更護(hù)花?！彼麄兊募t線那端，是蒼生百姓!他們將寂寞化為動(dòng)力，去“為天地立心，為生民立命”。(《細(xì)雨閑花皆寂寞》)
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我們都知道雅思寫(xiě)作的要求：語(yǔ)法，詞匯，連貫性，諸如此類。我們也受到了很多關(guān)于如何達(dá)到這些要求的指導(dǎo)：不要有細(xì)小的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤;運(yùn)用多樣的單詞和高級(jí)詞匯;運(yùn)用復(fù)雜的句型，包括各種從句、倒裝句和獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu);注重連詞的使用等等。所有這些，只不過(guò)是為了讓我們?cè)趯?xiě)作上能夠多得那么半分或者一分。誠(chéng)然，詞匯、句型和語(yǔ)法都很重要，但是，如果我們僅僅將目光停留在詞匯、句型和語(yǔ)法上，寫(xiě)作的高分就永遠(yuǎn)遙不可及。
為什么呢?讓我們想想雅思是怎樣的考試。雅思考試考的是考生在英語(yǔ)國(guó)家學(xué)習(xí)和生活的能力，換言之，一切都是以交流溝通為準(zhǔn)則的。雅思9分的定義是：像母語(yǔ)者一樣地交流。所以，很大程度上說(shuō)，雅思考的是我們說(shuō)的、寫(xiě)的夠不夠像母語(yǔ)者，或者說(shuō)，夠不夠地道。
問(wèn)題就在這里：我們關(guān)注的是我們的作文里寫(xiě)了多少?gòu)?fù)雜的句子，用了多少?gòu)?fù)雜的單詞，卻很少想一想：這個(gè)詞用在這里合不合適，這個(gè)句子表達(dá)這個(gè)意思會(huì)不會(huì)過(guò)于冗長(zhǎng)，這樣的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)所體現(xiàn)出來(lái)的語(yǔ)氣適不適合這篇文章。最后，我們只能在背單詞句型的痛苦和作文分低的糾結(jié)構(gòu)成的泥潭中越陷越深。
因此，雅思作文高分的秘訣，不在于背多少單詞，掌握多少句子，而在于我們能不能夠恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠@些單詞和句子。
為了達(dá)到恰到好處地使用單詞和句子的境界，我們可以做這么幾件事情：
背單詞的時(shí)候搞清楚單詞的感情色彩、慣用語(yǔ)境以及在其他語(yǔ)境中的替換詞。單詞與單詞是不同的，有些單詞有貶義的色彩，而有些單詞較為中性。有些單詞的出現(xiàn)代表語(yǔ)境比較輕松，而有些單詞只在學(xué)術(shù)文章中才會(huì)出現(xiàn)。這種情況在英語(yǔ)中是很普遍的，甚至一個(gè)字母的改變都會(huì)帶來(lái)這種差別。例如在英文名字中，ERIC和ERIK發(fā)音相同，但是后者更有一些邪惡的意味，所以大家都用前者。
多寫(xiě)文章，并將自己的文章與范文進(jìn)行比對(duì)。相信很多考生都做過(guò)這個(gè)事情，但是現(xiàn)在重點(diǎn)不一樣。我們對(duì)比的目的是找出來(lái)表達(dá)不一致的地方，并且深入思考為什么不一致。例如，在英語(yǔ)中主語(yǔ)通常不會(huì)太長(zhǎng)，如果有復(fù)雜的從句作主語(yǔ)，那么這個(gè)主語(yǔ)一般會(huì)挪到句子末尾，避免頭重腳輕的情況。但是，漢語(yǔ)囿于語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的限制，很難做到這一點(diǎn)，因此我們?cè)趯?xiě)英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)，就有可能寫(xiě)出帶著長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的主語(yǔ)的句子，然而這是完全不符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣的。多多進(jìn)行比對(duì)而不是盲目背句型，才明白自己的差距所在。
多讀原文。網(wǎng)絡(luò)的好處在于提供給我們一個(gè)空前便捷的信息平臺(tái)，我們要好好利用。如果有時(shí)間，多上網(wǎng)看看讀讀諸如《經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人》、《時(shí)代》這樣的報(bào)刊，看看英美人士寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章究竟是什么樣子。別小看這每天看一點(diǎn)的功夫，如果我們真的用心分析，堅(jiān)持下來(lái)寫(xiě)作一定會(huì)突飛猛進(jìn)。讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神，這句話不管對(duì)中文還是英文，都是有效的。
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中心句放開(kāi)端
文章中心句是整個(gè)文章的主題和寫(xiě)作圍繞的中心，通常應(yīng)該放在段落的開(kāi)端，這樣一方面能夠讓閱卷老師一眼看出文章表達(dá)的主旨意思，起到開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的作用;另一方面可以使文章條理層次更加清晰，邏輯性強(qiáng)，文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)合理。
中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用，放在段尾也可以起到總結(jié)全文的作用。這一方法對(duì)于寫(xiě)作初學(xué)者來(lái)說(shuō)還是有一定困難的，因此在六級(jí)考試中，為了減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤和損失，大家盡量將中心句放到文章的開(kāi)頭以保萬(wàn)無(wú)一失。
關(guān)鍵詞要具體
文章的中心句一般是通過(guò)關(guān)鍵詞來(lái)表現(xiàn)和限制文章的主旨思想的，所以為了突出主題，關(guān)鍵詞需要盡量寫(xiě)得具體些。
這里對(duì)“具體”的要求主要體現(xiàn)在兩個(gè)方面：一方面是要具體到能限制和區(qū)分文章段落層次的發(fā)展;另一方面是要具體到能說(shuō)明段落發(fā)展的方法。精確仔細(xì)地突出關(guān)鍵詞是清楚地表達(dá)文章主旨、寫(xiě)好段落中心句的重要前提之一，這對(duì)考生來(lái)說(shuō)有一定難度。
設(shè)問(wèn)擴(kuò)充內(nèi)容
中心句及關(guān)鍵詞確定后，文章的大概框架已經(jīng)清晰了，這時(shí)候就需要選擇和主題有關(guān)的信息和素材來(lái)填充這個(gè)框架。實(shí)質(zhì)上，針對(duì)關(guān)鍵詞測(cè)試每一個(gè)所選擇的素材就是一個(gè)分類的過(guò)程。
有一種常用的行文方法就是句子展開(kāi)前加以設(shè)問(wèn)，然后解答，即設(shè)問(wèn)-解答(why-because)的方法，利用問(wèn)題引出自己需要的話題再加以解答表現(xiàn)自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)緊緊圍繞主題。
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雅思寫(xiě)作想得高分 這些技巧不可不知道
一.詞匯的問(wèn)題
很多同學(xué)在雅思寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候都會(huì)背很多高難的詞匯，但這并不是雅思評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的核心。他們想要知道的是你有沒(méi)有精準(zhǔn)的用到了這些詞，把認(rèn)識(shí)的詞匯進(jìn)行鞏固了解才是真理。如何做到這些呢，把6級(jí)詞匯和雅思詞匯拿出來(lái)，你會(huì)看到很多你認(rèn)識(shí)的詞，但真要說(shuō)到用法，還是有很多不確定。把這些單詞整理下來(lái)，用例子和語(yǔ)義重新梳理一遍。
二.拓展詞匯
在做到精準(zhǔn)的用詞之后，就可以想想拓展詞匯事情。雅思寫(xiě)作的題材是非常固定的，分類題材，在每一個(gè)分類里面找出常用的詞匯。背誦范文只是一個(gè)步驟，最關(guān)鍵的是在每個(gè)題材下面練習(xí)寫(xiě)一篇自己的文章，里面用到這些語(yǔ)句和詞匯，仔細(xì)斟酌是否有用對(duì)這個(gè)詞。
三.論述的重要性
一篇文章寫(xiě)完最重要的是有沒(méi)有自己的觀點(diǎn)和認(rèn)識(shí)，這也是雅思考官很看中的一個(gè)方面。這時(shí)候論述的策論就很重要了，要考慮到扣題，也要考慮到完美的擴(kuò)展銜接自己觀點(diǎn)。這點(diǎn)對(duì)于詞匯句式相對(duì)較好的人是要重點(diǎn)突破的一關(guān)，也是7分和6.5的分水嶺。
7月21日雅思寫(xiě)作真題回憶及范文
題目為Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.
雅思小作文類型：流程圖
題目 The diagram shows the how recycled paper is made
雅思大作文類型：社會(huì)類
題目：Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.What do you think the causes of this problem?And how to solve this?
范文來(lái)自雅思哥：
Despite the high level of knowledge, employers today have found that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills needed in an office environment. This essay will analyze the main reason leading to the problem and offer some potential solutions to it.
People with interpersonal skills are the people who can vary how they act and what they contribute. They notice the strengths and weaknesses of their group, and they adapt. However, schools and colleges or universities have failed to equip students with such applied skills. Instead, students are encouraged to focus on their academic subjects exclusively, because they are only evaluated by their academic performance which is essential to receiving an academic qualification. Unfortunately, many of them have turned into information recipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way without truly developing abilities and skills required in today s job market. For high schools, educators should think more about how students are learning, rather than just what they are learning. Teaching should reflect the richness of real-life interactions, and to give students experience in the kinds of settings that are going to be useful to them when they leave school. Assignments and curricula should integrate opportunities to work collaboralively. Group projects, for example, are valuable learning opportunities.
In the higher education sphere, professors and administrators should encourage students to seek out real-world experiences. Colleges and universities could ask students to work cotlaboratively in the classroom and pursue internships and volunteer opportunities outside of it. Students should also look for critical growth opportunities within their extracurncular activities, rather than just viewing them as resume-fillers.
To conclude, jobs requiring high levels of social interaction are growing. In order to help graduates better prepare for their future career, changes should be considered in the education system.
雅思寫(xiě)作精簡(jiǎn)之道 長(zhǎng)難句請(qǐng)繞路
雅思寫(xiě)作精簡(jiǎn)建議一：避免空洞的單詞和詞組
1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)或重要的信息，完全可以刪掉。
比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換。
例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
雅思寫(xiě)作精簡(jiǎn)建議二：避免重復(fù)
1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒(méi)有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。
例如下面這個(gè)例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
Large對(duì)一個(gè)farm來(lái)說(shuō)就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來(lái)替換。
例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
雅思寫(xiě)作精簡(jiǎn)建議三：選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)
選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。雖然語(yǔ)法的多樣性也很重要，但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)可以參考的原則：
1.一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句%
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