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托福寫作實(shí)例講解如何找獨(dú)立寫作的分論點(diǎn)1
1. Study alone or with a group of students?
Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
可以采取it depends的策略，要看學(xué)什么科目。
有的科目，自己有足夠的自學(xué)能力，就單獨(dú)學(xué)，可以進(jìn)一步提高自己的學(xué)習(xí)能力;
而有些剛剛?cè)腴T的科目，往往需要?jiǎng)e人的幫助，所以喜歡跟同學(xué)們一起學(xué)習(xí)。
也可以采取先比較，后選擇的方法。
自己學(xué)習(xí)：安靜;有效率;制定計(jì)劃更容易;提高自學(xué)能力;本質(zhì)上，學(xué)習(xí)靠自己;但是有時(shí)自己可能解決不了問題;也可能使自己變得孤立……
與大家一起學(xué)：可以向更優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生求助;幫助別人解答問題也會(huì)使自己對(duì)問題的了解更深刻;
與同學(xué)們保持良好的關(guān)系;但是也可能因?yàn)槟承┤死速M(fèi)時(shí)間，缺乏效率……
『范文』
Each and every student has his/her own preference for study. Some prefer to study alone, while others prefer to study with a group of students. Both methods have their own relative merits.
While alone, the focus of study can be easily kept, with little distraction which always accompanies a group of students. And at the same time, while references are adequate, to study alone is not only possible but it is also helpful to cultivate the ability to solve problems, and furthermore enhance one's independence. Moreover, by keeping focus and developing independence, students become more and more competitive, which is often deemed as a necessary quality.
When learning with a group, discussing and debating become possible, which usually develop a perfect environment to develop critical thinking skills, and where many problems can even be solved unconsciously.
While references are not easily accessible, and students' knowledge varies from one to another, they can complement each other, and therefore save much time and energy. Furthermore, learning with a group simultaneously cultivates students' good sense of cooperation, which is usually considered as an essential virtue.
As of me, my preference depends on what subject I am learning or the phase in which I am. Different subjects may bring different choices. For example, if I was practicing piano, I'd better practice alone. If I was doing physical experiments, team work is always needed. Different phases also make choices different. Suppose I was learning a foreign language. If I was practicing my basic pronunciation, I'd better learn by myself. For an adult learner, a tape recorder is fairly adequate. But if I were to practice my spoken skills, to study alone would be a poor choice. I should look for or create an opportunity to learn with a group, therefore learn more effectively.
2. Buy a house or a business?
You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
『分析』
不要被"enough"所迷惑了，這是一個(gè)很含混(highly ambiguous)的詞。可以采取it depends的策略，要看錢的
數(shù)量是多少。
10萬(wàn)：買不了什么好房子，所以去做生意
20萬(wàn)：用5萬(wàn)付首期(the first installment)，用剩下的做生意
50萬(wàn)：買一棟30萬(wàn)的房子，剩下的錢做生意
100萬(wàn)：買一棟50萬(wàn)的房子，剩下的錢用來(lái)慢慢享受
也可以直接選一個(gè)，然后說(shuō)出理由。
買房子：可以用來(lái)孝敬父母;可以讓全家享受;而且會(huì)增值;很少的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
做生意：可以鍛煉能力;運(yùn)營(yíng)得好的話可以賺很多錢，能買更好的房子;但是風(fēng)險(xiǎn)很大。
『范文』
Choosing whether to buy a house or a business with saved money is a huge decision to make. There are many benefits to both of choices; however, I think that if I had enough money to buy one or the other, I would choose to buy a house.
When one buys a business, he/she is required to spend long, hard hours to ensure that the business is a success. Starting a business is no easy task, and statistics state that half of new businesses fail within the first year.
If one buys a house instead of a business, there is nothing that can fail. A house sometimes requires repairs, but usually such repairs can be done on one's own schedule.
A house is also an excellent investment. With the world population rising as quickly as it is, it is a very good idea to become a property owner. In the coming years, land will become more and more expensive, and therefore less attainable. Also, if one buys a house, it is likely that he/she will be able to sell it at a reasonable profit in the future. Providing for one's family is very important, and a house is a stable investment for a family.
Finally, owning a house is a good idea because it saves you from giving someone else money every month for your rent. Usually, when one buys a house, he/she has a mortgage that he/she must pay off in the coming years.
In most cases, the mortgage costs approximately the same amount of money as renting an apartment. It makes much more sense to pay for your own home, rather than adding to the wealth of someone else. In conclusion, I think it is a far better idea to buy a house rather than a business. A house requires less work, it is an excellent investment, and it allows you to keep your money by spending it on your own assets, rather than someone else's. In addition to these reasons, you can also rent out your house to someone else, thus creating an extra source of income for yourself.
英語(yǔ)寫作
托福寫作實(shí)例講解如何找獨(dú)立寫作的分論點(diǎn)2
實(shí)例講解一
題目一Do you agree or disagree the following statement : Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
題目二：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?
托福作文理由，忌諱的就是就事論事，不作任何擴(kuò)展。當(dāng)不作任何擴(kuò)展的時(shí)候，也就是不做任何細(xì)化的時(shí)候，其實(shí)不慣是老托福還是新托福，一個(gè)尋找作文理由利器就是細(xì)化。
所謂細(xì)化，就是不要拘泥于單純的題目。第一個(gè)題目，大家都覺得很空，“領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力”到底該怎么找理由，完全沒有頭緒。第二個(gè)題目，也是一樣的，“具有挑戰(zhàn)性的夢(mèng)想”與“現(xiàn)實(shí)的目標(biāo)”感覺遠(yuǎn)不如老托福里面的“是否建立工廠”好想理由。
但是如果我們對(duì)于領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力進(jìn)行舉例，我們自然而然的就會(huì)想到喬布斯，是一個(gè)超偉大的大企業(yè)家，喬布斯有什么過(guò)人的能力呢。1創(chuàng)新能力，否則不會(huì)有iphone與ipad; 2審美能力，否則Mac的字體不會(huì)那么漂亮，iphone也不會(huì)那么完美;3堅(jiān)韌不拔的能力，否則也不會(huì)建立皮克斯東山再起。再來(lái)想創(chuàng)新能力，我們可以通過(guò)旅游來(lái)獲得，什么可以通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)來(lái)獲得，堅(jiān)韌可以通過(guò)體育來(lái)獲得。到這，不也就找到了寫作的方向了么。
再比如說(shuō)現(xiàn)實(shí)的夢(mèng)想，還是挑戰(zhàn)性的夢(mèng)想，我們也可以進(jìn)行舉例?，F(xiàn)實(shí)的夢(mèng)想：1去海南旅游;2考全班前5 ;3給父母買禮物。為什么要做這些事情呢?1去海南旅游，可以多游泳，鍛煉身體; 2考全班前5，可以激發(fā)自己的積極性，告訴自己通過(guò)自己的努力可以實(shí)現(xiàn); 3給父母買禮物，可以增進(jìn)家庭成員的感情。這不就有很好的理由了么。
實(shí)例講解二
題目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.人們是否能不靠上級(jí)部門的關(guān)注，自己解決重要問題。
首先舉個(gè)例子，到底什么算重要問題。買房難算是大問題吧，要不是在國(guó)內(nèi)買不起房，你為什么要出國(guó)呢。買房都涉及什么。1地點(diǎn)：父母可以幫你選; 2錢：父母可以幫你提供; 3電器和裝修：自己賺錢解決。當(dāng)然，有些考友會(huì)覺得這樣的就太瑣碎了。其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，你可以再提煉嗎，這個(gè)題目，“地點(diǎn)”就可以提煉為前期準(zhǔn)備;“錢”就可以提煉為“資金”;“電器和裝修”就可以提煉為“后期升級(jí)和維護(hù)”，這不就是3個(gè)理由出來(lái)了么。
托福作文理由，切忌就事論事，其實(shí)只要我們大膽的進(jìn)行舉例，然后需要的時(shí)候，再適當(dāng)提煉，其實(shí)作文思路是非常好尋找的。前幾天給姑娘寫情書的時(shí)候，你也不能只寫我愛你，還一定要寫“不看你的眼，不看你的眉，看的時(shí)候心里跳，看過(guò)以后眼淚垂，不看你的眼，不看你的眉，不看你也愛上你，忘了我是誰(shuí)”這里的眼與眉不都是舉例么
托福寫作實(shí)例講解如何找獨(dú)立寫作的分論點(diǎn)3
1. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?
Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
『分析』
通過(guò)電影可以了解一個(gè)國(guó)家的
經(jīng)濟(jì)、科技
風(fēng)俗、習(xí)慣
歷史、文化
價(jià)值觀念 ……
相關(guān)題目：[82]、[180]
『范文』
One of the favorite pastimes of people today is watching movies. Movies can teach us a great amount about the world, especially if we watch movies from another culture. When watching a foreign movie, we can learn about the landscape and scenery of the country, the country's ethics and customs, and its historical events.
The world is a great and varied place, from the immense mountains of the Himalayas to the deserts of America. By watching movies, one can gain insight as to what these beautiful places are like. For example, I recently watched a number of movies filmed in America. I learned about the beautiful beaches of California, national parks such as Yellowstone and Niagara Falls, as well as man-made wonders such as the Statue of Liberty, Mount Rushmore, and the Golden Gate Bridge. Watching foreign movies is an excellent way to deduce where one wants to travel, if he/she has such an opportunity.
Watching movies also teaches us about a country's ethics and customs. For example, while watching American movies, I learned that children do not show as much respect to their parents as we do here in China. In some cases, children were very disrespectful of their elders, and ignored their wishes outright. I was shocked by this behavior. To give another example, I also learned about table manners in America, which are quite different from the rules we follow in China.
Furthermore, one can learn about a country's history by watching films. For instance, there are many movies that have been made about the wars in America, such as Gone With the Wind. Movies such as this show foreign viewers why America is the free and independent society that it is today. Hence, watching foreign movies is an excellent way to learn about faraway lands. One can learn about the landscape of a place, about its culture, as well as its history. Perhaps schools should consider watching foreign movies in classes to provoke interest from the students about such lands.
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